7:27 p.m. - October 07, 2004
i really like the beginning. this whole poem was a big like, epiphany as far as being honest out loud with myself. my fears and my defensive behaviors i use when i start feeling scared or insecure. the bottom half though...i dont like that it sounds all self-pity (i.e.: the nobody cares why should i line). but thats the thought that actually runs through my head at times. but, i dont really like the way it sounds. i like this poem not as much for its semantics but its very close to me...? idk. SHAPOOPIE!